Day 15 – Venus and Mars (Pantun)

Today’s Prompt: Write a Pantun, which is a rhymed quatrain (four lines, a-b-a-b rhyme) with 8-12 syllables per line and – get this! – the first two lines have no logical link to the next/last two lines! One just can’t help wondering why someone would come up with such a thing, but here goes:

Venus and Mars

by Angel Dawson

The moon floats past on an inky sky,

It’s a ship in a sea of bright stars.

You see folks in groups, they wave, say “hi”

The women from Venus, and the men from Mars.


About One Day Closer To My Dream Life

Hi, I'm Angel, and I'm so glad you stopped by. Although Life took me down another road, since childhood I have loved writing and the power of language to evoke feelings and memories, to communicate with the hundreds of people we come into contact with and build relationships with along the way, and to impart ideas with. It's high time that I reunite with my old pleasure and passion, and start writing down all those words that are rushing around aimlessly in my head, jostling with each other to be heard. Sometimes we most fear doing what we love most in case it doesn't work out as we hope, but sometimes we just need to take that chance regardless! Who knows, maybe those words and plots and characters will take me on a journey that others will get to share with me, and lead me one step closer to living my dream life... I hope so!
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